Sunday, January 24, 2010

To My Dearest Chimpu....With Love




I still remember the day,
When destiny threw me in your way,
The way you smiled, the way you helped me pick my book,
Oh your innocence and your grace,
You mesmerized me with just one look.



Your chashme wala chehra,
You roaming around dooba soch main gehra,
Your face became my memory ka permanent part,
But I dont think my clumsiness made an impression to last.

Trips to the cafeteria are but a reason to look at you,
I now time all your trips to the loo,
The way you walk with your laptop,
It makes my heart flutter and my dhadkan stop,

On the bus ride home, I take tere bajuwala seat
But you sit unaware and sway to your Ipod ka beat.
Do you know I travel 4 additional stops just to be with you?
To grab your attention, every week I wear something new.

I know you love chocolates, I know you are allergic to nuts,
You treat me as a friend but you dont notice my new haircut.
I know you read Paulo Coelho, I know your music ka taste,
You know nothing about me, all my efforts are a waste.

You blog about the love of your life, who I know isnt me,
You call her cutie but I am way better..Oh why cant you see?
With my black eyes and lovely tresses,
I look like Chandni ki Sridevi!

The whiff of your perfume makes me turn your way,
I see you choochie cooing to someone, asking her out on Valentine's day :(
My diary is filled with dates too....
But the difference is - I have dates only for you :(

This poem is dedicated to my Chimpu bhola bhala..
Woh kaisa hai re mandus, uske dimag par laga hai tala!

My first attempt at poetry now hangs in a limbo,
I dunno how to end this..Man! I am such a dumbo!
I know this poem wasn't very khaas..
Cmon wat else do you expect..Remember you are on Fullon Bakwaas!

115 comments:

COMMUNI said...

Awesome dear...First attempt at poetry?? Don't think so.

COMMUNI said...

Yay!!! me first!!!!

Dhanya said...

Who said your poem is not khaas ? I toh like only such poems :D :D

'With my black eyes and lovely tresses,
I look like Chandni ki Sridevi!' << Loved this line waise :D :D

Stupid Chimpu :|

Diwakar Sinha said...

:D haha...very nice..

Lucifer said...

this was awesome...jus awesome!!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

nicely written :)..

urs..hemu..

Tarun Mitra said...

suicidical

Tall Guy said...

It rhymed well so you did better :)

Chandni ki Sridevi kya baat hain

Blunt Edges said...

hahaha...so wonderfully cute shanu :D

n 1st attempt at poetry? remember that shayari club we co-founded in a friend's blog? ;)

ps: maine iss dil pe likh diya teraaaaa naam...chandni o meri chandni :D

pps: dead jealous of chimpu!

Ashley said...

Yes we are we are
We are at Fullon Bakwaas

With One eyed Wonders and Crushes galore
Hum blog premiyon ka aur kaun tikhana?

Chimpu tumhara lagta hai bada pyara
Chasmein aur Perfume ka leta sahara
Kitabo aur sangeet mein duba bechara
Kyu nahin dekh pata
Cadbury nutties ka ishaara!


Wah wah! Wah wah

Blunt Edges said...

ashley ne kya shayari hai maara,
wah wah karke dil me haara.
lekin pasand nahi aaya hume ye chimpu ka character,
ab kya kare hum hai hi aise chahe bulao koi doctor!

(my mind is screaming LAME LAME as i type this...who on earth rhymes character with doctor...but then what the heck!)

Ashley said...

Meri shayari ko Bluntu ne hain saraha
Shukriya mere yaar
Tumhein aata hai hire ko parakhna

Dil hara nahin hai
Jeeta hai tumne humara
Do do dil leke
Zaroori ho gaya hai Doctor ko bulana

Yeh chimpu ka charecter toh bas hai ek bahana
Uski aadaton par zara gour farmaana
Blog karta hain yeh chimpu bechara
Aur buses mein music sunta hain awaara


Bluntu..Woh kehte hai na..Samajhdaar ko toh ek ishaara hi kafi hota hai!

Wah wah! Wah wah!

Blunt Edges said...

aha aha :D

ashley ne khol di hai humari aankhen abhi,
ab rok na pa rahe hai hum apni hasi!
ishaara toh humne pehchan liya hai sahi,
lekin iss love story ki heroine hai ghum kahi!

Shanu said...

Mere blog ka leke sahara
Ashley chura rahi hai Bluntu pyaara
Bluntu, Chimpu dono hain mere
Rakh le Ashley tu apne liye baki sarphire

Bluntu ji nazrain apki dhundhti hai kiss heroine ko
Main samne hoon khadi..kyun nazar nahi aata hai..Ofho!
Mera chimpu karta hai blog aur sunta hai gaane
Aap inn adaton ko kyun nahi pehchane

Samjhdar ho toh samjh lo ishara
Kaun hai woh katil jisne churaya hai dil humara!

Blunt Edges said...

kahe toh hum ab kahe kya?
kehne ko socho toh hai ab bachha kya?
kehti hai heroine humari ke kisi katil ne chura liya hai uska dil,
ab hum toh bas umeed kar sakte hai ke she hasn't forgotten me still!

Shanu said...

@ Communi

YAY You first..you first :)

I am glad u liked it :)

Shanu said...

@ Dhanya

Haan yaar..hum dono ka poetry main taste same to same hai

And i agree with you...My Chimpu is stupid..but kya kare..dil hai ki manta nahi!

Shanu said...

@ Diwakar

Thanks :)

Shanu said...

@ Mayz

Welcome back...long time no see :)

Thanks for the kind wrds :)

Shanu said...

@ Hemu

Thanks da :)

Shanu said...

@ Tarun

Huh??

Shanu said...

@ Survivor

LOL..Thanks :)

Shanu said...

@ Bluntu

Read the poem I have pasted in my comments v carefully..I am sure u will then know that you dont need to be J of Chimpu at all!

Shanu said...

@ Ashley

Yeah Fullon Bakwaas nahi premiyon ka hai thikana,
Yehi hai mera motive, yehi hai mujhe sabko batana
Main bakwaas karti hoon,lekin ek nazuk sa dil bhi rakti hoon
Kab yeah baat samjhega Chimpu..kab woh chodega mujhe yun satana!

Wah wah wah wah :P

Shanu said...

@ Bluntu

Kuch kehne sunane ko baki na raha,
Tu kyun samjh nahi pata, joh mera dil tujhse hai keh raha,
Katil bhi tu hai, chor bhi tu
Forget main kaise karegi..mere dil main hai bas You!

LOL!

gayathri vishwanathan said...

With my black eyes and lovely tresses,
I look like Chandni ki Sridevi!

blunty jaise main bhi gaongi chandniiii o meri chandni...shanu tu white color kaa chiffon sari pehenke jaake dekh...kya pataa ipress ho gaya toh


mast tha tera lovewali poem...main toh teri AC ho gayi

P.S: loved the shayari by blunty and ashley....

Meenakshi said...

wah wah.. kya baath hai.. masth poem re.. khaas khaas..

first atempt?? phir tho pakka bindaas..

Reema said...

wah! wah! bahut badiya!

Blunt Edges said...

khullam khulla tune jo keh diya,
dil ko mere tune chu liya.
kehta hai dil mera tumse iss jahan se na daro,
jahanpana tussi great ho tohfa kabool karo!


:D:D:D

Shanu said...

Bakwaas ki main rani, bewakufi ka tu raja
Sapno ka hum jahan basayein ab aaja
Original shayari par churaya hua dialogue ka reply kiya..
Kyun apne hi words main tu nahi keh paya ki tune bhi mujhe hai dil diya!

Sid said...

"Chandni ki Sridevi" sahi hai :D
Time pass poem well written :)

Blunt Edges said...

tujhse kehna toh main chahta hu yaar,
lekin mein hu yaha aur tu uss paar.
mere dil se judi hai teri yeh dosti aur yaari,
by the way did i tell u...u r very very pyaari!

Shanu said...

Kehna hai joh woh tu keh daal
Distance ki parvah mat kar,yahan mera haal hai behaal
Iss rishte ko joh tune de diya dosti ka naam
Baccha liya tune mujhe hone se badnaam
I am nt just pyaari, Kabhi toh carefully look at me,
Dude, I am hotter thn ur HC :p

Blunt Edges said...
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Blunt Edges said...

of course u r very hot my dear,
karna hai mujhe ek baat toh ab clear,
tere jaisi awesome koi aur nahi hai yaar,
kaash tu hoti meri HC toh roz hota tera deedar!
:D

ps: made a typo in the previous comment/shayari...so deleted it :)

pps: we rock big time! :D

Tarun Mitra said...

Arrey aap toh burra mann gaye

Hindi mein bolunnn toh kattilll......
mar gaya mirza hinglish ke taleee

The Idiot Blogs said...
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The Idiot Blogs said...

Bahut dinon ke baad ek post paaya hai
Jisne mujse aisa bakwaas likhwaya hai

Bahut shayar ikkattha pyaar ki mehfil mein
Dilon ke badle sher mile is bazaar mein
Par Shanu, Ash aur Bluntu ke is pyar-e-trikone mein
Trikone mein chauta kaun hai

Is Chimpu ha parda faash ho
Duniyan ke saamne lao is zinda laash ko
Trikone ke chakravyuh mein
Is chimpu ka sarvanaash ho

Grayquill said...

You are not a poet? Hmmm... could have fooled me. btw: the ending gave me a great laugh. Your poem took me back to my school days so many years past. I would do similar stunts to be close to one who never knew I existed.
I am glad those days are over - way to much stress. But often now I sit alone waiting for my lady to come home.
Maybe not that much has changed.
Fun Post!

Meow said...

hahaha... wah re wah.. kya bakwaas re.. OH chandini ki sridhevI!!! way to go :D .. waiting for another poem on valentine's day :P

Shanu said...

@ G3

White chiffon ki sari? Ok cool..aaj hi try marti hai :)

Aww tu meri AC hai? I alwyz wanted a personal AC...So happy!

Shanu said...

@ Meenakshi

Thank you thank you..tereko pasand aayi na poem..bas mereko aur kuch nahi chahiye!

Shanu said...

@ Reema

Thank you thank you

Shanu said...

@ Sid

Thanks :)

Welcome to fullon bakwaas!

Shanu said...

@ Bluntu

Haan karti hoon main agree, rock karte hain hum donohi
Mujhe toh nazar aate hain hum dono jai aur veeru ki jodi
Main hi hoon teri HC, mat kar tu kaash kaash
Aankhen khol aur bahein bhi, lo khatam hui teri talash


LOL! We are too good Bluntu!

Shanu said...

@ Tarun

Nahi re bura nahi mana..bas samjh main nahi aaya tha tera comment..kya na meri angrezi thodi kamjor hai :)

Shanu said...

@ The Idiot

Prem ke trikone main hum phas chuke hain
Bas aapke hi intezaar main hum rukhe hain
Chimpu mera aur Bluntu bhi
Ashley ke liye kissi bewakoof ki kami thi

Aap ne aakar uss kami ko kiya pura
Abhi humara love story na raha adhura
Main, Bluntu and Chimpy nibhayenge saath
Aap aur ashley together ho toh ban jaaye baat

Chimpu mera nahi hai koi laash
Woh toh hai aisa, jiski hai har ladki ho talash
Mat karna tum Chimpy ko chot pohchaneki baat
Warna todke dungi main aapke haath main aapka daath


Welcome to the shayari club Idiot. I hope u njoi ur stay here!

Shanu said...

@ Grayquill

Welcome to Fullon Bakwaas

I am glad you liked my attempt at poetry. Yes, secret crushes are fun while they last.

Thank you for commenting. Keep visiting.

Kavya said...

Awesome poetry.. Keep it up..

The Idiot Blogs said...

Kahani mein ghadbad hai jee...

1. Main chahta hoon aapko
2. App chahte ho blunty aur Chimu ko
3. Blunty chahta hai Ash ko
4. ASh chahti hai blunty ko

To kyun na hum ash aur blunty ko rehne de.

Aap, hum aur chimpu ek naya trikon banayen.
Chimpu ke haat mein ek kela de
Bandar akela with a kela kush
Aap aur hum bhi kush
Ash aur blunty pehle se kush

What say.. win win scenario hai...

The Idiot Blogs said...

Btw... look at my profile pic.. dont you just adore my chin :D

Thousif Raza said...

loved it loved it loved it..... it was more than cute,a googly woogly woosh just for you :)

take care and keep writing..............

Scattered Thoughts... said...

Poem?? Shanu Rap.. :D

How about a voice recording ;)

Harini said...

Hehehe...Poem is actually very khas. Its so you. I loved it!!!

Shanu said...

@ Meow

LOL..Glad you liked it babe :)

Shanu said...

@ Never Ending Memories

Thank you for appreciating my feeble attempts at poetry

Welcome to Fullon.

Shanu said...

@ The Idiot

Nahi jee..aapko kisne kaha ki mera Bluntu likes Ashley?

He doesnt!

But yes, if what you say is true..I can give your scenario a thought :P

Shanu said...

@ The cute chined Idiot

Yup I think ur chin is cute...reminds me of Hrithik Roshan ka chin :P

Shanu said...

@ Thousif

LOL..Thanks :)

Shanu said...

@ ST

Voice recording? Why not? I sound like Lata Mangeshkar ;)

Shanu said...

@ Harini

Thanks babe :)

IceMaiden said...

ROFL!!!!! Awesome poem!!!
'With my black eyes and lovely tresses,
I look like Chandni ki Sridevi!' -- PRICELESS!!! :D :D

Thanks for visiting my blog! :)

Cheers,
Annie.

Shanu said...

@ Annie

Glad u njoied my attempts at poetry.

Welcome to Fullon.

scarlet pimpernel said...

uska best friend se firt karo !!!

Scattered Thoughts... said...

I am all ears.. :) let us have a youtube channel :P

BTW, new header is cool.. far better than that monkey shit

Shanu said...

@ ST

Trust me Maheep, u dunno wat u askin for :P

I am glad u liked the header..I rembr u were the only one who was so vocal abt not liking the monkey wala template...Chalo tereko kuch toh pasand aaya!

Shanu said...

@ SP

Lol..how i wish i cld...but trust me his best frnd is nuthin like him!

Ashish Sukhadeve said...

Happy Blogging!

bliss said...

AWESOME poem!! simply loved it!!!
great job, yaar, shanu! kaun hai ye chimpu who has no clue?? (Ayilah, that rhymes!!!)

and poem commenting between you and blunty is icing on the cake!!!!!! :D
hahahaha

NIM said...

wah! wah! kya baat hai! loved it! u could write jingles as a side business profession! ;)

Shanu said...

@ Ashish

Welcome to Fullon

Shanu said...

@ Bliss

Lol..Thnks babes

Shanu said...

@ Nim

Wat an idea Nimji ;)

commited to life said...

make him read this poem.. he will surely notice you
lolz

p.s was just passing by

commited to life said...

make him read this poem.. he will surely notice you
lolz

p.s was just passing by

commited to life said...

o i just noticed i have been to ur blog pehle bhi
nice to be back again..
:)

Ankita said...

wow!

awsme yar! maja a gaya padh ke! i hope ki tera sweetie pie tujhe notice kare and date pe bhi le ke jaye ;D

and baki posts bhi mast hainn!
par plzz jab date pe jao to u dont give him the directions, and god save him if he asks if this dish is veg or non veg :P

lol!!!

riddhiculous said...

To my dearest Chimpi
with love- chimpu :)


I still remember the day,
When destiny threw you in my way,
The way you walked the extra mile,
Oh your hair under the sun,
You mesmerized me, you are the one.

My chashme wala chehra,
doob gaya soch main gehra,
Your talkings become my memory ka permanent part,
I dont think your clumsiness affects the impression u cast.

Your trips to the cafeteria and my trips to the loo,
Are the only opportunities to look at u,
Whenever I walk with my laptop,
I create situations and moments that force me to stop.

On the bus ride home, you take mere bajuwala seat
I enact as if I am unaware and sway to my Ipod ka beat.
I disliked traveling but now I look forward to it, just to be with you?

I love the way you carry yourself, every week you wear something new.

I wish I could know you more, only if I could gather enough guts,
You treat me as a friend and I do not want that bond to be cut.
I often read Paulo Coelho and flaunt my music ka waste,
In an attempt to know if I could know, atleast something about your taste.

My blog about the love of my life, how do you know is she?
You are way better, I try and express but fetter, don't you ever see?
With your black eyes and lovely tresses,
You look like Chandni ki Sridevi!

The whiff of your perfume makes me disarray,
You are the one whom I wish to say, will you come out with me on Valentines day:(
I know you see me with the ‘other’ often coochiee coo (ed)...
But the truth is – she is just a sidey, it is meant to be you :(

This poem is dedicated to my Chimpi bholi bhali..
Woh kaisi hai re kanya, uski har ada hai matwali!

My first attempt at poetry now hangs in a limbo,
I dunno how to end this..Man! I am such a dumbo!
I know this poem wasn't very khaas..
Cmon wat else do you expect..Remember you are on Fullon Bakwaas!

riddhiculous said...

so, babe, sorry for a delayed reply.. saw the giggles gawwd i have missed a lott.. :) hehe funny post.. i already sent the reply from chimp's behalf..
and about the bluntu ashley chimpu shanu chhora chhori.. stop kero yeh jora jori...
agar sach much kerte ho tum itna pyar
toh public display ka tyag do vichaar

:)

hehhe

love u guys..the comments can take away chimpu ki saans...
after all he should know, it is fullon bakwas....

Shanu said...

@ Committed to life

Welcome back :)

Shanu said...

@ AS

Thanks :)

Welcme to Fullon.

Shanu said...

@ Riddhi

Awwwwww u are cho chweet....thnk u so much baby...u made my day!

Blunt Edges said...

@ Riddhi
n finally u joined in :D

riddhiculous said...

@ shanu- as per telegram rates that reply to my comment would have cost you a fortune.. :/..
hehhe
injustice hai yeh.. mein ne likha reply as long as your post.. atleast you could have been more genrous.. a bit generous.. kanjus makkhi choos..

@ BLunt..hehe yeah mein peehcey reh gayi yaar.. duniya ki is bheed mein,...sabse peechey hum khade..
and these badey log dont even write 25 words for their comments.. or even replies.. paise lagte hein kya..

Blunt Edges said...

look who's talking! arre mere kehne tak toh tu comments ka reply bhi nahi kar tahi thi!

guess saari ladkiya r kanjus with words :P

riddhiculous said...

look who is talking. You don't even post something new. :/

and my not replying to comments was laziness not miserliness.. and who knows better that my comments are always longer than your posts.. so u toh stop talking. because u rejoice writing comments so as to avoid posting more words at your blog.. huh dubara kabhi ladkiyon ko kanjus mat bolna.
:D

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious said...

Lol! Loved it! :D Btw, nice to know you're well and keeping out of trouble. Waiting for more such awesome bakwaas. Cheers! :)

Shanu said...

@ Riddhi and Bluntu

PLease continue the bakwaas

Blunt Edges said...

agar hum bakwas karenge toh aap kya karengi mallika-e-hindustan? :P

Shanu said...

@ Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

:) Glad u liked it :)

Shanu said...

@ Bluntu

Mallikae hindustan Bluntu ka dance dekhengi..Naach Bluntu naach!

Blunt Edges said...

oh hello...tune mujhe samajh kya rakha hai? ***mimicks shanu*** naach bluntu naach :P

haan agar tum paisa phekogi toh shayad kuch ho sakta hai! ;)

Shanu said...

Naach mere Bluntu ke paisa milega
Kahan bakwaas tumhe aisa milega!

Blunt Edges said...

hahahaha...tu phir se shuru ho gayi?

Shanu said...

@ Bluntu

You no like?? Toh main band ho sakti hoon!

Blunt Edges said...

of course i likes! i likes it like crazies! :D

Shanu said...

Good because me thinks youz didnt have much of a choice :P

Blunt Edges said...

i completely agrees with u...raat ke 1o'clocks me i has no choice!

Shanu said...

Why iz you a ganda baccha and sitting online this late? Teri Mommy ko complaint karun kya? Cmon go to bed like a good boy.

Blunt Edges said...

le...yeh kya baat ho gayi?
aap online late sitting...no prblm!
hum online late sitting...big prblm!

krishna kare toh raasleela...hum kare toh character dheela!

Shanu said...

Me have no problem if u sit online this late,
Maine dekha hai dost tera character certificate,
Tu baccha hai samjhkar tere ko deti hoon advice,
Tujhe umar main choti hoon, lekin akal se hoon wise
joh soyega jaldi toh hoga tu healthy, wealthy and nice!

Blunt Edges said...

mujhse tu umar me choti nahi,
birth certificate tune apna chupaya kahi.
hu toh main bachha lekin hu bada hoshiyar,
umar ka lihaz hai...warna kar deta tumpe waar!

Shanu said...

Ladki par war karna nahi ache ladkon ka kaam,
Yeh baat keh kar tune kar diya khud ko badnaam
Nanhi munhi bacchi hoon main tu samjhle yeh baat
Nahi toh chut jaayega aaj yahin apna saath

Blunt Edges said...

kar di saath chutne ki baat tumne,
aisa laga jaise jeene ki wajah kho di humne!
kya itna nazuk hai apna rishta,
care 4 a coffee in barista? :D

Shanu said...

I am not really a fan of Barista
I feel its overcrowded and thoda sasta
Lets go hang out in Mochas..its more my type
Khana acha hai wahan..its nt just hype
Maine toh suna tha ki u dildaar hai kanjus nahi
Afwa thi ya woh thi baat sahi
Come on...first date hai yaar..dont kar much much
Bill jyada aaya toh dnt worry we can go dutch!

Blunt Edges said...

kal raat ko gaya tha main so,
kar na paya tumhe reply maaf karo!
date apna hoga jaha bhi tum kaho,
hota hu main kaun tumhe kehene ko no?
ab bas tumse milne ka intezaar hai mere dil ko,
umeed hai issi baat se excited tum bhi ho!

Shanu said...

Jab tum chain se rahe the so,
Tumhare answer ke intezaar main meri ankhen rahi thi ro,
tumse hume bhi hai milna, isme nahi hai koi doubt,
Khushi ke maare, mann kar raha hai ki karun main shout.

Blunt Edges said...

6 minute me aaya tumhara reply,
dil mera khushi ke maare karne laga fly!
toh kaisa raha tumhara aaj ka din?
hope it was poora kaam ke bin.

Shanu said...

Din toh thik tha..nuthin great,
Went for a movie but reached 30 mins late,
Movie ka na start samjha na samjh aaya end
Paisa waste kiya maine yeah sochkar kiya repent!
Abh hum chale sone jaanu, na karna reply ka wait,
Thoda sa patience rakho, paas aa raha hai apna Vday ka date :)

Blunt Edges said...

movie se yaad aaya, main bhi ja raha hu kal dekhne ishqiya,
lekin afsos hai ki tum saath nahi ho mere piya.
good night kehne ka waqt ab aa gaya,
kya pata pyar mera pehle hi shayad so gaya.

hahahaha...u r the best! happy sunday :D

riddhiculous said...

meri gair hazari mein jaane dono kya kya karte hein yeh ladkey ladkiyan..
HUh and mera kya shanu ki bacchi daal daal kacchi.. u completely sidelined me that too aise jaise dood se makkhi.. kaisi hai tu sakkhii..
huh...
Bluntu tujh se toh naa thi aisi ummeed.. AS Prem says in Andaz Apna Apna.. 'Yeh thi teri dosti yehi tera pyar.. beech mein aagayi Shanu ki deewar..'
hehe bhagwan tumhari jodi salamat rakhe...

riddhiculous said...

dekha mein ne keha tha.. sunshine hu per fir bhi no replyyyy,,,... u are my give me some rain.. :)

Shanu said...

@ Miss Rain in the sun

Tereko kaise ignore kar sakti hoon re main..tu toh sweetu hai na :)

Le reply maara..khush?

riddhiculous said...

Ouch.. tumne reply maara... marne ki kya baat thi.. de hi deti.. u understand give take.... hehehe thank you shanu didi.. :D

~Hamsini~ said...

Shanu I love your blog. Jeeti raho :)


Eesha.